Max’s+Assyrian+Attack


 * The Assyrians Invade! **
 * It was during the late afternoon during the summer when my mother was slowly preparing long meals in the city state within the Fertile Crescent. My father was working hard in the wheat fields so we do not die of food. This is the day when the Assyrians invaded. **
 * It was long ago when the Assyrians had attacked the city state. It had not started until later into the afternoon. I could hear the thunderous roar of hooves shaking the Earth and my mud house was about to collapses as the Assyrians approach on horsebacks as proud as they could be. I heard the high pitched sounds of the wheels turning te chariots, and the sound of the whip and screaming for the horses to go faster. I was scared as could be because the Assyrians were a tough and fierce type of army. Suddenly I could hear my neighbors and my mother and father screaming to me to run for my life and hide. When I was hiding, I could hear the sounds of little babies crying. Suddenly, I looked at my home made of mud. “It was on fire” I yelled. When I was yelling, my mother and father thought I was hurt. Before I knew it, my mother was caught. Next, the only choice my father and our neighbors could make is to surrender because the Assyrians were too tough. **
 * Later into the night, my family and our neighbors surrendered and took my parents away from me and they had burned everything that was still standing high and tall in the city-state. If it was not burned, they burned it. All of a sudden I was the only one who was left. After years and years of my parents and neighbors being slaves, they were killed by the Assyrians. That day, I could just smell blood oozing down my parents bodies. Also, I could image myself crying and yelling in sadness. The whole city-state was burned down with not one building standing, but I had survived alone. Shortly after my parents were, I was planning on getting my revenge on the Assyrians who had killed my parents. **
 * About a year after my parents and neighbors were killed, I had died of two dieses. I had not got my revenge, but I knew that the Assyrians who had killed my parents and my neighbors would regret doing that because that thought will come back and haunt them even when they are dead. **